Chapter Four – The Crofter’s Tale

The witch brought the man a cup of her favorite steeped tea: ithelwee leaves and a splash of milk. He thanked her graciously. His hands shook as he drank, but his breathing slowed and some of the color returned to his face. Benefits of the tea, Tildy knew. Which she already had prepared, as though in expectation of his arrival.

“My daughter, Tildeneth,” the witch said, introducing her with the usual story.

“M’pleasure,” he said in a perfunctory way. He poked at Ivy the newt, who had appeared to sniff the tea.

Tildy smiled but said nothing as she studied him. Her adoptive mother’s relaxed demeanor told her she had no cause for suspicion, despite his unscheduled arrival. The lack of prickling by her neck hairs confirmed it.

The man, however, kept his eyes locked on the witch, as if she might disappear if he looked away for a moment. Tildy held back a smile, further intrigued: he did know her.

As though sensing this unnecessary vigilance, the witch sat at the table and pulled her chair close to him. She covered his free hand with her own, another telling sign. At an early age, Tildy had noticed that her adoptive mother generally avoided skin contact and had an obsession with cleanliness, though this latter item didn’t apply to any work done in the dirt of her garden.

While her touch put one fear at ease, the man’s eyes frequently flicked toward the windows, as though expecting to see some pursuer. Tildy continued watching him, reading the language of his movement, as well as that of his voice. He was scared, obviously, but it was deeper than anything he’d experienced in the haunted Forest of Eddlweld. And whatever fears he had, Tildy concluded there was nowhere else in Empyrelia he wanted to be.

He offered a wan smile. “They said you wouldn’t remember me – remember any of us – but I never doubted. I knew y’well, didn’t I?”

“Perhaps, child,” she said kindly, “at least, you and some others did. The trees have shed many leaves since.” Confused, Tildy looked from one to the other. They looked close enough in age that “child” didn’t seem the appropriate term for him.

“Aye,” the man agreed, taking no offense. “Though you look much the same as you ever did. A bit more kempt, if you don’t mind m’saying.”

“I do not,” she said with a smile that recalled fond memories. “And your eyes have not lost that boyish twinkle.”

“Ah, yer too kind,” said the man with a dismissive wave. “But I thank you just the same.”

Tildy wasn’t a fan of “the small talks”, especially the kind that made her feel like an intruder. She shifted her feet and continued to feign interest, though experience had taught her she wasn’t very good at it.

The man noticed her fidgeting. “And you, lass, I’m sorry for m’ rudeness. It’s been a long road for this ol’ crofter. I’m a farmer of Hillsend y’see, from up near the Hearkenfells. Them’s mountains northeast a’here, if you weren’t aware. You can call me Dess, like everyone else. Well, everyone but her,” he said, indicating the witch. Catching her eye, he asked, “Did you say y’named her ‘Tildeneth’? Like the stinky weed?”

“Tildenethia is not a weed,” Tildy said coolly as she crossed her arms. The witch hooted as the man blushed.

“No offense, young lady, no offense,” Dess said, holding up calloused hands. He appeared truly apologetic, but she never let anyone off that easily.

“You can call me ‘Tildy’,” she said in a peevish tone that was mostly respectful to her guest. Mostly.

The man’s flustered face became one of delight as his eyes travelled to her chin. “Oh ho! I see someone’s gotten a dose of that brown manure she calls medicine,” he said with a sideways glance at the witch. A deep, rich laughter followed, causing Tildy to smile in spite of herself. A sound of pure joy, she could tell it would fill any space. “Ah well, I’ve smelled worse, which we both remember,” he added, his amusement fading.

* * * * *

The witch did not appreciate this description of her smudge remedy, and so ignored his comment. “You have travelled far,” she said, changing the subject. “And you seem to have danger’s shadow at your heels. What brings you so far, Demensen?”

“Aye, danger’s shadow indeed! But I can’t rightly put words to the peril, if you take my meaning.” He wrung his hands and looked back and forth between them, his eyes returning to the window. “There’s an evil in my land,” Dess began. “It’s not Orklins or anything like that, though rumor of them’s come, as well. Two autumns ago, during the harvest, travelers started bringing more tales of dark things than we’ve heard in our lifetime. Tales of somewhat different. Worse.” He took another drink of tea.

“Sounds like a matter for your lord.”

“Aye, you’d think. When the Baron Stoneward held court, he would hear the occasional tale from a crofter or traveler, y’know, some large shadow moving in the trees. Rumor of some ol’ Troll thumping down the other side of t’hill. The baron dismissed ‘em as drunken tales or Fairy stories.” He looked at Tildy to explain, “There’s not much to do in Harsdale, and the drink causes a bit o’mischief, y’see.” The witch rolled her eyes.

“After a quiet winter, the stories became more frequent, more difficult to ignore, still he did nothing. Many suspected this was because no nobles was affected. He weren’t caring a wheat stalk for seed, if you get my meaning.” Tildy understood, even if she didn’t grasp the parallel. In her mind she pictured some fat lord, living in gluttony as his people starved.

“Then the old Harshhay farm was destroyed. Flattened. This weren’t no fire, and it weren’t some storm, as the baron’s lady wife suggested. I saw the ruin m’self! It was like some Giant had stepped on the house and barn. There wasn’t a single upright board on the yard. Slaughtered animals everywhere. And that poor family, all gone. Like they was nothing. I don’t think the little ones made it out the house, bless ‘em.” Dess took a dirty rag from his pocket and blew his nose. “Not that anyone had the heart to look. Who could sleep again with a memory like that?” Tildy shook her head in agreement: she certainly couldn’t.

“Disappearances began. Reports of travelers and traders on the Fare Road not making the Shard.” He looked at Tildy. “That’s the baron’s castle. We didn’t discover why they was missing, but people came looking for them. And some of our own never returned. Old Grey, the blacksmith on a shoe-run. Nag Hobbs and his son, taking a horse to trade. Widder Sey and her old farmhand Sedge. All unaccounted for. Too many for accidents or highwaymen, says I. And many others agree, I might add.” He paused to take another drink.

The witch’s brow was knitted. “Surely, the baron could not ignore all of it?”

“He said little and did less!” The crofter smashed a meaty fist into his hand. “I hear he stopped holding court. Put his lady wife in charge, who didn’t care a whit more than the baron, that was clear from the first, they say. Eventually, they closed the guard-gate to all visitors, but whether that was the baroness’s command or the castellan pleasing his lord, I’m sure I wouldn’t know. That’s how them Obsequiant folk are.” Tildy wanted to ask about the unfamiliar people, but the man said something that drove it from her mind. “The result’s the same and getting worse!”

“What do you mean?” she asked, quite appalled at the story.

“I mean, trade’s stopped coming up the Fare Road and we’ve stopped bringing goods over to Traybend, the village on the river. Now, it’s early in the year, so we’re not hard put for the winter stores yet, mind, but we’ll have less coin and fewer supplies to get us through! Traybend does good bit o’ business, what with all the river traffic. But us of Harsdale and them’s in Dethelwain was getting nervous. They were the closest village, and between us we could meet each other’s needs. Then that stopped, too.” Dess looked unusually grave, and he passed a hand across his face.

“It happened to Dethelwain, as well,” said the witch quietly.

“What happened?” asked Tildy, looking from the witch to the crofter. And then she understood. “No!” she said, clapping a hand to her mouth in horror. “The whole village?”

“Aye,” he said with sorrow. “Last autumn. Like the farm, but worse. Much worse. Burned to the ground or flattened. Every house, shop, and stable. Berrenbee, he’s the bard, he found them. All of ‘em. The whole village. He was in hysterics for a week. Been having delusions ever since.”

“That’s horrible,” Tildy said with barely a whisper.

“His tale was so grisly, no one had the stomach to bear further witness to the scene. He’s not touched the drink since!” He punctuated this with a sharp nod of his head, as though this were a particularly unpleasant thought. “Though his coin purse for telling stories is fatter. But enough was enough. Our village and everyone we knew was in peril. We had to take matters from Fate’s hand since no one else would.”

* * * * *

His voice strengthened. “Some wanted to cross the grand river Dandolen and find the garrison at Ferebind. Some wanted to appeal to the Steward, since he governs Empyrelia in the absence of a King. But it’s a damn long ways north to frozen Yrrengard, and there’s doubt over his diminishing power,” he said, touching his heart respectfully. “I, and few like me, wanted to find the Trollcharmer, the only person we knew who’d fought a monster. She’d been rumored to have settled in dark Eddlweld.”

“The who?” asked Tildy. She looked at her adoptive mother, who again bore the resigned look of one who knew the conversation would reach this point.

The crofter gaped at her, and then looked at the witch. “Y’ve never told the tale? Yer own daughter?” He threw his head back and laughed heartily. Slapping his knee, he said, “Goodness me! Such a tale as you haven’t heard, lass, if you don’t mind m’ saying.”

Tildy gave her mother a bemused, inquisitive look, but received only a frown in response. “I do mind,” the witch said sharply to him. “That was many a year ago and more. I am thick in the bark and brittle in the wood from long, long years. The Tershemel – Trollcharmer, you say – does not exist anymore.”

The crofter gave her a shrewd look. “So y’say, but you forget that I saw you in the market. There’s more young sap flowing in them branches than you’d care to admit, says I.” The witch blushed, making a derisive noise. “Don’t you answer me ‘til you’ve heard m’whole tale.”

“Go on,” she replied, though Tildy did not hear warm encouragement in the words nor see it in her crossed arms and glowering face.

* * * * *

“With winter coming strong, I had to wait for spring, and even then ‘til after the First Starfall. I left more ‘an two fortnights ago, as measured by the grower’s calendar. An easy journey it was to start. But soon I got weird feelings.” He lowered his voice to a whisper. “Like I was being watched. Never no sign or sound was there, just a small hiss of unfelt winds. But I could tell, if you get my meaning.”

Tildy understood and nodded. She had keen senses, often perceiving things the witch didn’t. The prickling sensation and raising of hairs was unmistakable. It usually made her feel like a wary rabbit.

“It’s a lonely road, but generally a safe one, if you take precautions. I started to hear rumbling behind me, as of distant thunder. It were unnerving.” He looked at Tildy again. “Like a chasing storm, but each boom a footstep crashing upon the ground. Sometimes, I’d wake, feeling the ground shake as something large passed in the dark. Sometimes I thought it followed me; other times, we happened to be going the same direction. I needed more protection, so I started sleeping by day and avoiding the roads.” He sighed, his body rising and falling as though the breath started in his toes. “I stopped a day in th’ village Greywetherton and felt safe enough there. Things have quieted since.”

Dess looked hard at the witch. “Whatever it is, it’s ranging out further and further.”

“And is no longer satisfied with travelers or settlements,” Tildy added.

The crofter nodded. “Where it comes from, we have no idea. But we guess from the south end of the Hearkenfell Mountains. Greywetherton’s just a fortnight’s travel from Harsdale and that puts plenty of folk in danger.”

The witch sighed and nodded. “And Wayfahren a fortnight from there.”

Tildy jumped up. “It would practically walk within sight of our front door! If it follows a straight line from Greywetherton to Wayfahren, it would skirt the forest’s edge!”

Tildy and the crofter looked expectantly at the witch, who deliberately stared out the window, as though seeing something far away. When she finally spoke, her voice was even and resolute. “Such work is a young person’s trade, and not for one such as I. Make no protest, my mind is set.” Tildy watched his features slide down his face, hope melting into despair.

“But do not lose faith!” she added as she faced them again. “Wayfahren’s crossroads bring many peoples of varied kinds. I know a man. Fietha is,” she paused as she often did when describing their roguish friend, “is cleverer than most when it comes to these things. He will be able to arrange a meeting with a fighter who can help you. Perhaps a Dwarf Drumcleaver or and Elven Wardreven.”

The witch stood up before Dess could respond. “It is settled. Since it is too late for you to find lodgings in Wayfahren – not to mention too dangerous to travel at this time of night – you will stay in our guest room and leave with Fietha in the morning.”

“Aye, must be gettin’ on t’midnight, when many things haunt outside a person’s doors. Here, more than most.” The crofter suddenly looked very tired and old. He followed her silently up the stairs to the spare bedroom.

* * * * *

Tildy thought about everything the man said, and while the unknown monster was certainly thrilling, it was the insights into the witch’s past that intrigued her most. Thinking it would make a wonderful book, she remembered her own discarded book in the library. As she picked up The Firedrake, the nearest bookshelf caught her eye. Her literary interests and tastes often changed with the wind, as they say, and she found herself wondering what else she might have a mind to read.

The Wayward Prince and the Girl of Stone was an awfully sad book that brought nothing but tears.

Pandemonium Grammatok, which was a dreadfully boring instructional on translating the common Baselands tongue into Berserklin, the vulgar language of Oggles and Orklins.

An enormously thick book, entitled Mellifluent Descent, seemed as likely to break her ribs as put her to sleep.

The witch arrived to find her holding Revenant Feare. “That book terrified you when you were six. You swore you would not open it again.”

Tildy didn’t recall that, but her mind was suddenly elsewhere. Unable to resist, she asked, her words all a-tumble, “The Trollcharmer? And Gudwith? You suddenly have many names! And to face a Troll and live,” she marveled.

“Another tale for another day,” said the witch, a slight color on her cheeks and her voice heavy with exhaustion. “I have put all of that behind me: the misunderstood creatures, the dungeon hunts, the courts of queens and kings. Or at least, I thought I had.”

Tildy stared in wonder. She’d never had an inkling of such tales!

“These were not things I wanted to do. My heart’s desire was to live as you have known me here, and have, well…” she paused, an old sadness crossing her face, “have a life much as we have had together. But I had a talent for those adventures and people needed help.”

“People still need help,” Tildy urged, more directly than she intended.

“Yes, families need my help. Here. With cures and midwifery, not running into the woods to battle dangerous beasties,” she waved her hand dismissively. “Needs like those are better served by trained knights or seasoned warriors, not some old woman in a brown dress.” She sighed, a deep, weary sound that concluded a long day of toil. She kissed Tildy’s cheek. “Good night, Tildeneth.”

“Good night, mother.”

The witch demurred and left on silent feet. Tildy watched her disappear up the stairs before turning back to Revenant Feare. Deciding she didn’t need a good scare, she returned it to the shelf, gasping as she read another book’s title: Tershemel Nifique. That was the word the witch used for “Trollcharmer”. Excited that she might read similar stories, she removed the book and turned to the first page. Seeing that the text was in Elvish Silvarin, she returned the book to the shelf in disappointment. While she could read much of the language, it required more concentration than she was willing to offer this time of night. With a sigh, she made for the stairs, carrying The Firedrake under her arm.

* * * * *

Mindful of a stranger under their roof, Tildy closed her door and locked it. The witch might know the man well, but she did not. She pulled her dress over her head and shook it straight. Hearing a tiny clink of metal at her feet, she looked down at the floor, where she spied a gleam in the candlelight. The pin! Sweet parsnips, she’d quite forgotten it since her return from Caraban Losh! As she picked it up, she silently chastised herself for neglecting this lost treasure, this lost clue.

A shiver prickled her skin as midnight’s kiss stole through her linen underslip. Tildy quickly put on a thick nightdress before slipping into bed. She studied the pin closely by short candlelight. It looked like a stickpin, but the head was too encrusted with dirt to see more detail. She thought she spied a glitter of purple. Her thumb rubbed away the grime, though there was a tarnish she could not remove. Silver? With a little more brushing, the lump at the end revealed a silver wolf with tiny purple gems for eyes. Garnets or amethyst, most likely. She hadn’t read much about jewelry, aside from the colors of stones. Those same books often described the heraldry of monarchs, knights, or noble houses, but she couldn’t recall a single one that bore a wolf with purple eyes.

She rolled the pin between her fingers, imagining the wolf could dance. When her candle flickered and died, she let it be, feeling the irresistible pull of sleep. She drifted away into slumber, curled within the warmth of her blankets. She dreamed of people carrying sacks of purple jewels and fabulous treasures, laughing at the misfortunates who’d drawn the wrong kind of luck on Healing Day.

* * * * *

Morning arrived. And for the second day in a row, Tildy woke late. She rushed downstairs to find the crofter and the witch talking at the table over breakfast. She greeted them with sleepy gibberish, to which they responded with cheerful good-mornings of their own. She was about to sit at the table when her mother tutted.

“I ask you, who goes to bed with dirty fingers?” she said to Dess. Tildy looked down and saw the dirt she’d removed from the pin the night before. The pin!

“Every mother’s son who’s born a crofter,” he laughed in response. “And your young miss.”

Tildy ran back upstairs to her room, remembering that she’d fallen asleep holding the pin. She tore apart her linens, and not finding it, she looked under the bed and on the floor. Think, she told herself, remember falling asleep. She’d been looking at the pin, the candle died, and—the candle! She returned to the bedside and saw the pin resting beside the candle holder. Feeling a relief she didn’t understand, she changed clothes and placed the precious item in her pocket, vowing not to forget it there again.

When she returned to the breakfast table after washing her hands, the witch and Dess were drinking tea and laughing like old friends. Tildy smiled to herself: she rarely saw the witch in such a mood. The bright smile and rosy cheeks suited her adoptive mother well. It warmed her heart and removed the final mistrust she’d harbored toward the man. She gave them a proper greeting as she sat down to eat.

The witch said to Dess, “Yesterday would have been better, since Wayfahren was bursting with Healing Day guests, but most of the travelers likely remain. ‘Late drinks make late departures’, as they say. I am soon expecting—” there was a knock on the door, at which the crofter jumped, “someone who can assist you.”

Tildy rolled her eyes without pausing her eating. She always knew.

Dess looked uncertain but said nothing as Tildy walked to the misshapen door to reveal her most favorite person in the world. “Fietha!” she said, giving him a hug, her gripe of two days prior forgotten.

A smile emerged from his greying beard, and he returned the embrace. “Well met, and again so soon!” he said, stepping across the threshold with her in his arms. “I felt an urge this morning to make a delivery. Earlier than is my custom, but that’s how these urges go,” he said, giving Tildy a knowing wink and a feline grin. He spotted Dess and looked at the witch. “And here you already have company.”

She got up to welcome him. “We were just talking about you.” Fietha arched an eyebrow that distorted his scarred forehead. “We have need of your expertise.”

“Buying or selling?”

“Hiring.”

“Ahhhh,” he said with an appraising look at the crofter. He joined them at the table and chewed a morningcake as the witch quickly shared the tale. When she finished, he said, “You’re in luck! There are yet many travelers in town, plus those who stopped on their way to the tourney in Formantine. For the right price and promise of renown, we can convince one or more to detour themselves for you.”

Dess frowned. “The renown I c’n promise, but I’m light on coin.”

The witch waved a dismissive hand. “I might not be able to make the journey, but I will take care of that! Old friends and all such good things.” Dess looked relieved, and Fietha’s tight smile became a broad grin. She gave him a shrewd look. “And I expect friendly exchange and an honorable fighter,” she told him. “Or I will curse the axles of every wagon you own.”

“You wouldn’t.”

“I would.”

“Yes, I believe you would,” Fietha laughed. “But first, let us finish our delivery business, and then I will drive my new friend back to Wayfahren, where we shall see what we shall see.”

* * * * *

Tildy helped the two men unload the goods and foodstuffs. She giggled every time she looked at the wagon’s axel, imagining it breaking and hearing Fietha’s colorful and imaginative curses. As Dess carried the last parcel into the cottage, she rubbed Biscuit’s back. Fietha stood nearby, adjusting the horse’s harness. It was time.

“Fietha?”

“Hmm?” he responded without turning around.

“Can you do something for me?”

The man turned around with a smile. “I love doing favors.”

“You love collecting owed favors,” she responded with a guffaw.

“True, that is my favorite part of the bargain. Never undervalue the currency of a favor, Tildy.” Seeing the look on her face, he changed his tone. “But I see this is a serious something.”

Tildy held up her hand, revealing the pin in her palm. “Do you recognize this?”

Fietha leaned forward to inspect the object, angling his head and fixing his merchant’s eye. “Steel, maybe. No, the tarnish suggests silver.” He looked closer. “Amethyst, I’d wager. Rare these days, quite rare.” He talked to himself as he examined it, “Common in construction — but the materials are not afforded by the commonfolk, especially the gems. Could be used for anything. Clothing, most-like. There are faint scratches on the tip from a metal cap that would keep the point from poking the skin. Likely for the very clumsy or the very young.

“The other end, though,” he said trailing off. “A dancing wolf? I’m not familiar with the symbol.” He straightened and handed it back. “What is its significance?”

“I think it might be a clue to my past.”

Fietha raised an eyebrow. “How ever did such a thing come to you?” he asked in wonder.

She’d intended to tell him the whole story, but under his scrutinizing gaze, it seemed too fantastic. Instead, she simply said, “I found it at Caraban Losh.”

He stiffened, but recovered so quickly Tildy wasn’t sure she’d seen his expression change. Carefully – so as to protect her feelings – he said, “There is quite a distance between these two dots you’re trying to connect. Twelve years and some.”

“That’s why I need you,” she said in a small voice.

“Meaning, you didn’t go to her,” he said, indicating the cottage where the witch could be heard talking to Dess.

Tildy released the breath she was holding. “I’ve sent her on so many wild gander chases over the years—”

“You thought you’d send me on one?” Fietha said with a grin.

She returned the smile but didn’t feel it. His supply of jests was endless, even in serious matters, and she wasn’t in the mood.

Reading her expression, he said, “I joke, of course. I would be happy to take this errand for you, Lady Silverleaf.” He finished with a small bow.

This time, her smile was genuine, as was the blush spreading across her face. “Thank you,” she said, handing over the pin. Fietha casually slipped it into a pouch as the witch and Dess exited the cottage.

* * * * *

The witch handed Fietha a bag of bones and a small purse bulging with coin. Hefting the latter, he looked curiously at her. “There is something else you request?”

She stared evenly back. “I have not known you to question excess payment.”

“Nor do I now, but I assumed additional instruction from you in exchange.”

“Hmph.”

Tildy knew her adoptive mother didn’t like being obvious, but believed a little humility was good for her. Fietha must have thought the same, for he missed no opportunity to make her uncomfortable. He was the only one who could, as far as she’d seen.

The witch continued, “There is nothing else, except an expeditious transaction. No detours.” His smile nearly faltered, but he inclined his head to show that he understood. Tossing his traveling cloak onto the wagon, he climbed up and Dess followed. “Drewgi thanks you for the bones!” he said, as he stowed the parcel.

Tildy and the witch said their goodbyes to the men and returned to the cottage as Biscuit pulled the wagon into the trees. “No spooks going to harry us?” Dess asked Fietha.

“Not once the path accepts you,” Fietha said.

“Path accepts?”

Tildy smiled as Fietha chortled and the men disappeared. “You think your friend will find help in Wayfahren?” she asked as they returned to the cottage’s kitchen.

“If Fietha’s childish lie about the path does not shake Demensen’s faith in him. And yet, he has a way of bringing the right people together. It is uncanny.”

“Since I won’t be able to witness any of that Trollcharmer prowess, how about a monster story?”

* * * * *

“It is time for you, Tildy Foodcharmer, to tell a story with your mixing spoons and knives. Perhaps we shall talk of myths over luncheon.” The witch sat down, shaking her head. “But, oh, that was a weary tale that Demensen told. And troublesome.”

“What do you make of it?” Tildy asked as she began her food preparation.

“I am uncertain. It is brutal enough for Gobbledohs or Orklins but ranges further than is usual for them. Besides, they always leave evil markings and befoulment with their attacks. I thought perhaps a Troll at first, but its actions suggest more intelligence. No one has seen it. And survived, that is. I do not know. I do not know.” She trailed off, deep in her thoughts.

Tildy worked away in the kitchen, humming and merrily preparing a savory stew. “Perhaps one day, when it’s over, your friend Dess will come back and tell us how his story ends!” She tossed ingredients across the kitchen, each landing with a plop! in the cauldron that hung over the fire.

The witch did not answer, nor did she chastise her adopted daughter for throwing food. Tildy saw her frown and it worried her.

They ate the stew with crusts of bread. The witch was unusually quiet, and Tildy knew there would be no stories of monsters or magic. When her mother left abruptly without finishing her meal, she knew better than to ask why. Through the kitchen window she watched her pacing the Garden, finally stopping to rest on an old log that lay beside a glowing smolder-shrub. A favorite spot for contemplation. Even at this distance, she could see a face etched with concern.

She cleaned up the dishes and went to her room, thinking about the pin, Dess, and the previously unmentioned adventures of her adoptive mother. Many following days transpired similarly: Tildy completing her chores; the witch quiet and introspective. As the days became weeks, Tildy came to notice an increased watchfulness in the forest, like a dying wind that heralds the coming storm. The familiar electric fear returned to the hairs on her neck.

Something was wrong.

Did something happen to Fietha and Dess, the old crofter?

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